Feedback From Friends On Draft

I asked some of my friends to look at my groups rough draft of the music video and give some feedback (both positive and negative points).

My friends fit into our target audience - they were girls aged between 16-24.

I managed to get some responses.

I made a video with some captions of their comments alongside the video to help visualise how we could improve the video based on these comments.

comments from Diana Baukerte on Vimeo.

These are some of the messages I received from my friends when I asked them whether they could give some feedback on our rough draft music video:

I then asked my friends if they liked our music video draft, the majority said yes and the person that said no gave reasons. They said that they like the concept but doesn't like it out of sync near the end and will happily watch it again and give an opinion once it is finished.