Liam, you have become disengaged with your blog and since the last health check your work on the blog is worrying. Your blog count is low (just 54 post at the time of marking) you have big gaps between posting, the order of posts is haphazard and the content of the posts is very brief. I urge you to read through the feedback below and complete the to do list / targets as a matter of urgency.
strengths:
- some evidence of filming
- some planning for the ancillary
weaknesses:
- time management - big gaps (e.g. 2/11-20/11)
- order of posting haphazard
- very little evidence of editing or drafting music video
- reliance on text to present work so very little use of ICT
- no research into similar ancillary products
- minimal detail and posts are very brief
to do / targets:
1. complete ALL ancillary tasks as a matter of urgency - you MUST have evidence of research into similar products, not just the planning and drafting tasks - 48 / 49 / 50 / 51/ 54 / 55 / 56 / 57 / 58
2. post tasks in chronological order
3. use ICT to present your work
4. put more detail into each of your posts - more explanation of the task / research / findings and reflection on what it means and how it can help you develop your own products is needed
After reading the comments on my blogging health checks I realised I have a lot of things I need to improve on, for example i need to complete all of the blog posts mentioned to increase my mark. I also need to improve my use of ICT and go into more detail onto my blog post.
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